Scream MAG

December 13, 2010
By raeherron SILVER, Lewis Center, Ohio
raeherron SILVER, Lewis Center, Ohio
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Scream, goes the train
And he's riding away.
Mother watches him go,
But he misses her wave.

Scream, goes Captain
Barking to the fresh meat,
Who scream in their nightmares
Fear of more than defeat.

Scream, goes our soldier,
With the blood on his shoes.
Scream, goes his mother
When they bring her the news.

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on Oct. 29 2011 at 1:41 pm
LifeIsPoetry PLATINUM, Kapowsin, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"Every time you smile at someone, it is an action of love, a gift to that person, a beautiful thing."
– Mother Teresa

The word 'scream' gave an interesting attitude to the poem- almost haunting. Great job!

rgroot said...
on Oct. 14 2011 at 1:43 pm
Okay, now I'll try that here.  Awesome, great work!

rgroot said...
on Oct. 14 2011 at 1:42 pm
Awesome. So proud of you getting published.

on Jul. 19 2011 at 10:39 am
starstruk87b GOLD, Delaware, Ohio
10 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You're friends with everyone until you're not."

this was really good! i have a poem called scream too, u shud check it out ;)


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