Substitution

December 27, 2010
By nickykens ELITE, Draper, Utah
nickykens ELITE, Draper, Utah
134 articles 2 photos 86 comments

You’re just a substitution.
A momentary pleasure.
A temporary distraction.
An ego boost and measure.

I’m sorry if that hurts you,
I say it how I see:
I’m only here to use you
And give you none of me.


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on Aug. 17 2012 at 11:09 am
nickykens ELITE, Draper, Utah
134 articles 2 photos 86 comments
Thank you so much! It's definitely one of my favorites.

Annemarie23 said...
on Feb. 14 2011 at 11:04 pm
I agree with AlwaysWhy, I love the bluntness of it. It's a great poem

AlwaysWhy said...
on Jan. 30 2011 at 7:47 pm
AlwaysWhy, Draper, Tennessee
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I love this. So much emotion and blunt honesty behind the whole thing. It's short, bitter, and absolutely beautiful. 


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