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Walking down the street

On the hot summers day

Our feet clanking against the warm pavement

A mile there

Then the Ice cream parlor

Called geppetto`s

Open the door

Feeling the cool burst of air

I ordered

Cause I had the money

Two smoothies please

You got mango

I got strawberry banana

Do you want whipped cream

Yes

The money clanged as it hit the counter

The crushed ice grounding

And poring into the cups

Plop in a straw each

And out we go

To the park

To lay on the grass

Watching the clouds

In the hot summer air

Slurping our smoothies

I took a sip of yours

You took a sip of mine

Till they were all gone

Lied there for another minute

We walk back home

Singing a song



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introducingshelbyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 28, 2011 at 1:34 pm:

Hmm... I'm surprised nobody commented on this. (Yes, it's me, the girl who picked a fight over "interpretations of the Bible," Shelby.) It was good.

 

I like strawberry banana smoothies. Those are my favorite.. In my opinion, they're kind of the best. Not to be overly chatty, but your works are pretty good.

 
johnjohn123 replied...
Jul. 1, 2011 at 8:02 pm :

Thanks... :)

oh and by te way sorry about that other comment of mine. i thought you said "can`t" not "can"........ i have really bad Dyslexia

 
introducingshelbyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 1, 2011 at 8:14 pm :
Hmm you don't say. Well. Nice to meet ya, hon. Good work of writing.
 
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