I'll be here...

December 6, 2010
By blank_pages BRONZE, Moore, Oklahoma
blank_pages BRONZE, Moore, Oklahoma
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When the end seems to near,

I hope you know that I'll be here

When the sky darkens the night

I hope you know It'll be alright

When you feel the earth is falling

I will come, just start calling

When everyone seems to have left
you alone with fear

I promise I will never leave you, my dear.

When you know you've done wrong

I won't judge you , not at all.

I will always be there

When your sad, and when your crying

All I want is your tears to be drying.

I guess what I'm trying to say is ..

Even when you think I do,

I could NEVER hate you.

I will always love you, brother

I'd never trade you for any other.

Whether your smiling, shining, happy as can be or your tears flow like a waterfall....

I will be there through it all.

So when you fear the end is coming...

Just call for me, I'll come running

The author's comments:
I really want my brother to know I love him with all my heart and even though we fight a lot, I want him to understand that I truly care. I will be there for him, always.

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This article has 9 comments.

Honey bear said...
on Dec. 31 2010 at 12:53 pm
I love this poem Mary!!! We are so proud of you.

Mary (me) said...
on Dec. 31 2010 at 12:32 pm

Wow, Mom.

mom7? :)

At least you didnt go with "Snow White" or "Mama G"

(And yes, she was thinking about that!)

Love you mom and I'm pretty sure EVERYONE ELSE knows not to press EVERY STAR before the FIFTH one to put a five star rating. Pressing the first star, actually gives a 1 star rating, unbelievable I know! ;)

Haha, You certainly are a ...unique person.

Love you mom!

mom7 said...
on Dec. 31 2010 at 12:23 pm

I loved it but selected the wrong rating by accident, I meant to pick a five star rating because it is awesome!!!!!! The site will not let me alter it so I am very sorry, you know I love you!!!  For anyone else out there : make sure you select ONLY the star of the rating you wish to choose. 



Mary (me) said...
on Dec. 29 2010 at 1:44 pm

Haha, really? "Icey" and "allymoose"? Your awesome!

Thank you all so much!:) I'm glad to have you guys in my life.

AllyMoose said...
on Dec. 29 2010 at 1:31 pm
Icey you did a awesome job on at peom. But the only thing I can say is aaawwwwww!!!!! haha:D

AllyMoose said...
on Dec. 29 2010 at 1:28 pm
Icey you did awesome the only thing I can say is aaawwwwwwww!!!!!!! haha :D

on Dec. 29 2010 at 9:38 am
Your dad is my little brother and you have shown what a supportive sister you are.  Little brothers can be very annoying but in the long term the love of family trumps all the little problems along the way.  I remember well.  Great job of writing and your brother will some day recognize what a treasure he has.

Mary (me) said...
on Dec. 28 2010 at 9:48 pm

Yes, you do know me. Although easily annoyed, I love him to death. Yeah, I can tell you are always wanting to be there for Cedric, like when you were at H.E.J.H.

I guess that's just how all big sisters are. You care about them so much but sometimes they just annoy the heck out of you! :)

on Dec. 28 2010 at 4:13 pm


I in a way, feel the exact same way with Cedric. I want to be there for him, but he can be such a lazy butt some times! You an awesome person. But, you also get annoyed easily. And you show your feelings in a different way. Being your friend, i know who you are and what you really mean and that you CARE, but you show how annoyed you are WAY easilier! [and i know what your dealing with when it comes to your brother-haha]


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