Perfect : An Acrostic Poem

December 5, 2010
Pretending to be
Everything you're
Really not. Stop trying and
Find yourself. You won't need
Everyone's approval. If you
Can't find who you really are, you can never be
Truly perfect.

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santi_boiiii said...
May 15 at 1:08 pm
i like it good
leafy This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 21, 2011 at 1:37 pm
Very nice! I haven't seen many acrostics here, and this is pretty good, and definitely has some meaning. 5/5
MidnightFire said...
Aug. 4, 2011 at 10:20 pm
this makes me think that people are trying to be perfect so they never really can be, was that in the ballpark of what you were getting at?
CarrieAnn13 said...
Jul. 24, 2011 at 2:53 pm
Great!  You don't see many acrostic poems on Teen Ink and this is a good example of one.  Excellent work!
shadowrider said...
Jul. 19, 2011 at 7:52 pm
I like it! It's interesting and inventive!
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