Ole' boy

November 29, 2010
By KLM705 BRONZE, Plaquemine, Louisiana
KLM705 BRONZE, Plaquemine, Louisiana
4 articles 1 photo 5 comments

It’s all over
I was free
Had all I ever wanted
But tell me why
My feelings tossed around
I was happy
You were happy
But tell me why
They tugged at us
Like a little kid tugging mommas’ shirt
You was their little boy
But you was mine
So tell me why
They made me stop
You stop
Us stop, it all stopped
But tell me why
We just let go
Cried out
Shattered hearts
But tell me why
I still love you
As you love me
No more crying
But tell me why
It’s all over
They got their little boy back
And my mom got her little girl back
Hope you’re happy
But tell me why

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on Jul. 22 2011 at 7:23 pm
Odessa_Sterling00 DIAMOND, No, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
All gave some, some gave all. -War Veterans headstone.

This poem was confusing, i didn't get it. The title doesn't make sence to me either.  You also made a few grammer mistakes, but I don't know if you meant to do those or nott.

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