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A Teenage Girl's Diary

November 23, 2010
By BrendansLeadingLady GOLD, Killeen, Texas
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Un baiser qui n'est jamais goûté est toujours et à jamais perdu.

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Dear Diary,
I'm in love! He's perfect!
Dear Diary,
The days are passing so perfectly.
Dear Diary,
He seems a little moody.
Dear Diary,
We had our first fight today.
Dear Diary,
He won't answer my texts or calls.
Dear Diary,
He dumped me today. My life is ruined. I will never fall in love with anyone else.
Dear Diary,
I'm in love! He's perfect!

© Carly M., Cleveland, GA

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drf409 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 10 2010 at 11:36 am
drf409 BRONZE, Plaquemine, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
"The most beautiful things in life can't be touched but it must be felt with the heart." -UNKNOWN

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I like this poem because you talked about how you started off with the dude and how it ended. My favorite line was "I'm in love! He's perfect!" I feel that way now with this special someone. If you would have explained more, it would have made the poem better than what it is now. Keep up the good work.
Suziepatricia BRONZE said...
on Dec. 9 2010 at 10:04 pm
Suziepatricia BRONZE, Wickliffe, Ohio
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This was very good, it shows that sometimes feelings aren't as serious as they seem.