November 19, 2010
By Flowergoat SILVER, Pleasant Plain, Ohio
Flowergoat SILVER, Pleasant Plain, Ohio
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A yellow and silver wrapper
hides the disguise
of a milk chocolate
Mr. Goodbar.

Another piece
this one has a brown
and silver cover
hiding it’s delicious

A Mr. Goodbar
isn’t good to everyone
so stores should not
use false advertising
on their products.

Milk chocolate
is a weird name
because how can
chocolate be milk
chocolate is chocolate.

The author's comments:
In class we were given two candy bars and we had to write about them before we could eat them.

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