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Eat me Alive

Eat me alive, darling
Lick away my tears, perfect statuesque doll
Sip from my blood, sugar
Please help me forget how I tried not to fall
Devour my ears, sweetheart
I don’t want to hear your sick lies anymore
I’m an edible hurricane, lovely
I’ll offer it all as you step out the door
Will you gnaw on my bones, honey?
You’re my personal heaven leading straight down to hell
I give you my heart, dearest
You have permission to feast on it as well



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AnonyMiss said...
Dec. 9, 2010 at 8:27 pm
i appreciate all of your comments! this was sort of an experiment so im glad it was well recieved(:
 
Jesicamethyst said...
Dec. 8, 2010 at 10:20 pm

There are no words to describe what kind of writer you are, its poems like yours that make me want to write something as beautiful and powerful as this.

This is beautifully written & I love how its all dark and just so in your face.

I love everything about this, please continue.

 

 
evenlyodd said...
Dec. 8, 2010 at 2:37 pm
this was everything the others said it was.... i really like it because it doesnt focus on the positives.. and we have to many poems like that.. (:
 
jojo said...
Dec. 8, 2010 at 11:00 am
that is a really good poem i really understood its meaning
 
VAL508 replied...
Dec. 8, 2010 at 12:36 pm

Your poem was deep!  I think this was a little too intense. Your poem is vivid and powerful!

p.s. Be strong boys are immature and time heals everything even broken hearts(:  

 
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