Last moments

November 16, 2010
By Collide SILVER, Portsmouth, Ohio
Collide SILVER, Portsmouth, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
i want to show them im not just some piece in their games - peeta from the hunger games


As blood drips from the open wound The soldier knows it will all end soon.
He sees the faces of family and friends
Hoping one day he'll see them again

The pain is starting to fade away
He sees the light as he hears his family say.
we love you our son, our brother, our kin.
we hope oh we hope to see you again

As he takes his last breath.
And awaits his death.
He sees the angels all around.
He hears the most heavenly sound.

Now he is gone but only to us
For that soldier oh that brave brave soldier.
Knew the Man upon the cross
That died for all of us as he,
for our nation, our country, our world to be free.


The author's comments:
thanks to all those men and women who gave their live for our world to be free

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Collide SILVER said...
on Sep. 2 2011 at 2:43 pm
Collide SILVER, Portsmouth, Ohio
6 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
i want to show them im not just some piece in their games - peeta from the hunger games

thanks :) i was hoping for that reaction and for people to get that

on Mar. 18 2011 at 8:46 am
Basketball23 SILVER, Pine Grove, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"I'm living in a shell with no soul" -Three Days Grace (World So Cold)
"Time still turns the pages of the book it's burned" -Avenged Sevenfold (So Far Away)

I love everything about this!  The way you went from the soldier dying to comparing him to Jesus when he died on the cross for our sins is just phenomenal.  GREAT JOB!!!


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