Night Sky

November 11, 2010
The light in the sky shines down where I lay. I look back up and to my dismay I see the moon and stars in the sky and also I relize it's time for goodbyes. So as I walk away and out of sight, I miss you already, my heart no longer feels light. Your beauty is equal to that of the stars. That shines upon me as I walk though these bars. Back to a place where Im trapped up inside. And thinking of you I remember Im alive.





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Alice13 said...
May 13, 2012 at 8:35 pm
Hey urhere3. I took your advice and wrote a poem about one of my closest friends (I didn't forget... I'm always true to my word). :) I am showing it to them tomorrow at school, and if it goes well I will soon post it up... Thank you. :) I just thought you deserved to know. (Still love your poem... Sorry I'm using your comments screen as a way of communication. :P)
 
urhere3 replied...
May 13, 2012 at 8:42 pm
Ha! Well its quiet alright ^^ I'll look forward to reading it. Thank you for keeping me informed.
 
urhere3 replied...
May 13, 2012 at 8:55 pm
Also, call me matt :P
 
Alice13 said...
Jan. 8, 2012 at 2:22 pm
Beautiful. It left me breathless. You are an amazing writer, you know.
 
urhere3 replied...
Jan. 8, 2012 at 2:28 pm
Why thank you kindly. I personally disapprove of my work but positive feed back is nice
 
Rainfall74 replied...
Jan. 8, 2012 at 3:10 pm
My toughest critic is myself. Actually, I don't my poems up in the hopes that people will think they're good. I put them up in the hopes that people will tell me what I can do better, how I can improve. But I think everyone wishes deep inside for people to like their work. The first comment I recieved on this site, and I was overcome with joy... I personally like your work, a lot. :)
 
urhere3 replied...
Jan. 8, 2012 at 3:15 pm
Thank you also. I do like the positive feed back yea, but I write to express my feeling like everyone, but for who its written about. Its cool to have others like it but its the special person I wrote it for who's opinion matters to me.
 
Alice13 replied...
Jan. 8, 2012 at 7:16 pm
That makes a lot of sense. Maybe I'll keep that in mind next time I write something. I don't think I've written a piece about or for someone before... Thank you. :)
 
urhere3 replied...
Jan. 8, 2012 at 7:20 pm
No problem. You really should. Most of mine are about people :P I find they are the best because they come from my inter-most feelings
 
Alice13 replied...
Jan. 8, 2012 at 7:25 pm
I can see that. Well, when I do I'll let you know. :)
 
urhere3 replied...
Jan. 8, 2012 at 7:31 pm
Cool stuff. Cant wait.
 
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