my life revolves around you.

November 9, 2010
By marmar18 BRONZE, Warren, Oregon
marmar18 BRONZE, Warren, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
doesnt matter how many breathes you take but how many moments take your breath away.

Sitting in class is,
Knowledge trying to
Its way into young minds
Pens and pencils tapping a rhythm of writing
Hope just waiting to turn into

Sitting in class is,
Success splattered everywhere in this room
Giving us,
As students,
A feeling of pride

Sitting in class is
Paper being wrapped around me and twisting
My ideas are expressed and
Free to,
Explore and wonder

I can see kids grasping Mr. Sanderson’s words and taking and turning them,
And making them
Their own

I can hear the shuffling of feet,
With the odd side conversations.
When I hear the details that make them unique in their own way
Then I hear the weirdest sound,

My thoughts

The author's comments:
this piece is something i wrote in class, something that was random but also very true.

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