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Oh So Dear

November 4, 2010
By maggie512 BRONZE, Alhambra, California
maggie512 BRONZE, Alhambra, California
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A love so pure
How so dear
In which i might
Hold you so tight
Never let go
Until you say so
Hope you wont say
You'll walk away
In this i say
I'll change that day
Breathing the air
Thinking if love's fair
Having you
is Dearly true
Love does exist
and you'll be my last kiss
Until the day ends of time
You'll be all mine
Holding me tight
and lets just might
We'll never lose that light

The author's comments:
I was bored, laying on my bed. Then i just felt if I should write a poem about my boyfriend. Plus i was studying about Edgar Allan Poe in class with my english teacher. That's what really made me want to write. Edgar Allan Poe inspires me to write.

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on Dec. 7 2010 at 10:47 pm
Domtasticful BRONZE, Alhambra, California
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This is really good! good rhyme scheme too. i'd like to see more of this :)