the world

October 30, 2010
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the world is in my hand,
rotten to the core,
filled with garbage and despression,
the sun keeps on shinning,
and the smiles keep returning.

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Zazawish777 said...
Nov. 12, 2010 at 9:44 am
hey! this is great, its short but to the point. I really love this. Please rate and comment in my work.  5***** (stars)
t.i.m.n_w replied...
Nov. 15, 2010 at 7:36 pm
thanks, i was worried that it was too harsh and means alot to me to have my first comment!!! ;)
Zazawish777 replied...
Nov. 16, 2010 at 8:06 pm

this is a great piece! it puts the point out there and gives you enough details to see it. And I know what you mean, it's good to have a first comment. Keep up the good work! please rate and comment mine! thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



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