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The wind is a trigger
For the rainbow liquid waiting fast
A small wave emits
The trees are singing to set it free
Call to the sphere
For the wand held up high
Goodbye



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creich said...
Dec. 1, 2010 at 9:51 pm:

Terrific! 

Even better without the final line though.  Try it and see how it feels.

 
soldout replied...
Sept. 7, 2011 at 8:54 pm :
Its a gd way to end it though. great detail and imagery
 
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