Bubbles

October 17, 2010
By bluebird SILVER, Sandy Hook, Connecticut
bluebird SILVER, Sandy Hook, Connecticut
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The wind is a trigger
For the rainbow liquid waiting fast
A small wave emits
The trees are singing to set it free
Call to the sphere
For the wand held up high
Goodbye


The author's comments:
Look closer at small things and you will find every detail of life.

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soldout said...
on Sep. 7 2011 at 8:54 pm
Its a gd way to end it though. great detail and imagery

creich said...
on Dec. 1 2010 at 9:51 pm

Terrific! 

Even better without the final line though.  Try it and see how it feels.



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