Please Hear What im not saying

October 14, 2010
By bsmith BRONZE, Spartanburg, South Carolina
bsmith BRONZE, Spartanburg, South Carolina
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As I sit here
Trying to find the words to speck
I wonder why you can't hear me
I know what I am saying
But for a reason you can't hear me
I try to tell you what I want
It feels you’re not even hearing me
All you do is talk
But when will it be my time
To hear my voice
To understand my words
That flows across these lips of mines
To feel my pain
To understand me
Tell me something
When will you hear what I’m not saying?

The author's comments:
this piece is meant for my father because every time we fight and he yells at me he never really get to hear what i have to say about what im going through

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on Nov. 25 2010 at 8:42 am
SMWells PLATINUM, Carlisle, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Some truths best left unspoken.

Very clear expretion in few words. Dosen't get any better than that.


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