i lost her

October 13, 2010
By wesley37 BRONZE, Monticello, Kentucky
wesley37 BRONZE, Monticello, Kentucky
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i lost her and now im alone
but the pain i have not shown
she doesnt care either way
that i am blue and gray
i guess her love was all but real
but i rly hate the pain that i feel
so i guess this is goodbye for me and you
but i am rly rly blue
she hurt me so bad that i hate it so
but i guess i have to let her go
thats all ill say and i shall go
but ill always love her with my heart and soul

The author's comments:
this is about how bad im in pain right now after this girl broke my heart

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on Oct. 28 2010 at 2:31 pm
Chiconey BRONZE, Boise, Idaho
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Favorite Quote:
"Life...is Chess, just because you begin the game as a pawn, doesn't mean you can't finish it as a king"~Ethan Allen Hawk

You did very well in your writing and i think that putting ur heart into writing really brings out a true poet or writer! You did amazing and i can definately relate! Keep up the good work!


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