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Is this really you?

October 12, 2010
By MZTHICKNESS BRONZE, Spencer, Oklahoma
MZTHICKNESS BRONZE, Spencer, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
NEVER LET THE FEAR STRIKING OUT KEEP YOU FROM PLAYING THE GAME


IS THIS WHAT YOU ARE?
a man who doesn’t work at all
can you be a good father
because you have more than one child
i am tired of being blame for the mistakes you made
is this really a selfish man
who keeps his feet wet in the dirty sand
and still have the nervous to call himself a man
a man like that has no plans for his life
and no wife since i am leaving and never coming back.


The author's comments:
i was inspired to write this because there are a lot of hard working women out in the world who takes care of there man who doesn't want to work at or take care of there kids.

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on Nov. 1 2010 at 12:51 pm
MZTHICKNESS BRONZE, Spencer, Oklahoma
3 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
NEVER LET THE FEAR STRIKING OUT KEEP YOU FROM PLAYING THE GAME

i love your poem people don't understand sometime how life is so hard