All Alone

October 12, 2010
By Rox18 SILVER, Riverside, California
Rox18 SILVER, Riverside, California
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in my house

all alone

in my room

all alone

in my heart

all alone

in my mind

all alone

in my spirit

all alone

in my voice

all alone

in my soul

all alone

in a crowded place

all alone

everywhere i go

im all alone.


The author's comments:
i was lying in bed one night with thoughts popping in my head thinking that im a pretty lonely guy lol. so i just got out a pen and paper and wrote this. i believe everyone feels lonely sometime so i hope when ppl read this that they arent the only ones who feel alone at times.

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on Oct. 18 2010 at 9:29 am
bluegirl440 DIAMOND, Park City, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
Everybody lies. -House

Alone and lonely are two very different things I actually wrote a poem comparing the two called Alone or Lonely. Great work....

on Oct. 17 2010 at 5:07 pm
yomaster BRONZE, Portland, Oregon
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I agree, my favorite part was being alone in a crowded place because it's o true, you can even be alone with your friends!

on Oct. 17 2010 at 1:07 pm
holly.nicole SILVER, Templeton, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"It's Only Awkward, If You Make It Awkward."

this is good....it makes me think! GOODJOB

on Oct. 17 2010 at 9:21 am
Cupcakegoesrawr SILVER, Plymouth, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
sometimes you can't see the pain that someone feels

This is really good

when you said "in a crowed place, all alone" that really made me think of how i'm always feeling like everywhere i go i'm alone


on Oct. 16 2010 at 12:25 pm
TheNinjaStickFigure BRONZE, Bluffton, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Does this keyboard make my finger look fat?

Everyone in this world feels lonely, and it's a scary thought to most people that they will be all alone. O liked how you said, 'in a crowded place, all alone'. That was a powerful sentence that really brought it home for me. Good job!


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