feeling that can't be described

October 4, 2010
By blackrose666 BRONZE, Sterling Hgts, Michigan
blackrose666 BRONZE, Sterling Hgts, Michigan
2 articles 16 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont give up on something you cant go a day without thinking bout


I can’t describe it,
This feeling inside.
I feel like I’m floating,
When really I’m falling.
I feel like I’m filled with light,
When I’m a dark abyss,
I feel high,
When I’ve never even had a hit,
I feel a mixture of things,
I can’t put to words.
Maybe just one…
Love



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on Nov. 25 2011 at 9:07 pm
blackrose666 BRONZE, Sterling Hgts, Michigan
2 articles 16 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont give up on something you cant go a day without thinking bout

always will

on Nov. 25 2011 at 8:22 pm
Prometheus PLATINUM, East Aurora, New York
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Great use of contrast! Very strong writing.

TapTap SILVER said...
on Nov. 25 2011 at 8:21 pm
TapTap SILVER, New Berlin, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
Dream as if you'll live forever, love like there is no tomorrow, dance like there is no one watching.

Never thought of describing it like that...but your right love has its highs and lows! Keep writing please!


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