feeling that can't be described

October 4, 2010
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I can’t describe it,
This feeling inside.
I feel like I’m floating,
When really I’m falling.
I feel like I’m filled with light,
When I’m a dark abyss,
I feel high,
When I’ve never even had a hit,
I feel a mixture of things,
I can’t put to words.
Maybe just one…

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Loki17 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 25, 2011 at 8:22 pm
Great use of contrast! Very strong writing.
thefamoustapper said...
Nov. 25, 2011 at 8:21 pm
Never thought of describing it like that...but your right love has its highs and lows! Keep writing please!
blackrose666 replied...
Nov. 25, 2011 at 9:07 pm
always will
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