The Unforgettable Florida T rip

September 30, 2010
By ccrystal BRONZE, South Plainfield, New Jersey
ccrystal BRONZE, South Plainfield, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Live as if you'll die today, dream as if you'll live forever."

We were looking forward to flying to Florida today./
The state of Florida sounded like a great place to stay./
Little did we know that out trip would not be fun after all./
The bad trip started when we were at Orlando in the mall.

The people who went that day were my mom, my dad, and I./
Also, my brother, his wife and their son who always asked why?/
That day we were all very happy to be there shopping./
it was fun until my nephew fell down the stairs while hopping./

Everyone stared while my nephew was about to cry./
No one was doing anything and just walked on by./
We all rushed towars John, hoping nothing had happened to him./
We looked at him and realized he has a broken limb./

John's mom tried to comfort him but the pain was too hard to bare./
Once he reached the hospital he was under great care./
John turned out to be fine and the break was not so bad./
Early the next day I decided to wake him and his dad./

They found out we were going to Universal Studios./
John was happy to go see all the rides and videos./
His mom thought it was too soon, but we were prepared to have fun./
The car ride wasn't bad but we were glad it was quickly done./

We took John in a wheel chair so he could get around with ease./
When I got out of the car, I tripped and fell right on my knees./
It hurt really bad but i did not was to ruin our day./
If we left, I would feel bad for ruining John's day of play./

The day at Universal Studios was not very fun./
We didn't ride many rides nor play many games were we won./
The rest of our stay was ruined because it was filled with rain./
Our trip to Florida was filled with unluckiness and pain./

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