My Gift From Above

October 6, 2010
By karissalynb GOLD, Elmore, Ohio
karissalynb GOLD, Elmore, Ohio
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My heart is so full of love It's like you're my gift from above You put together the broken pieces And your love for me never ceases We talk about our future plans Even though haven't really held hands I don't mind and neither do you At this point I don't think there is anything that you can do To changes feelings that burn past flames It burns past all the names Of who I was wronged by As you hold me while I cry I knew when YOU used the word love You were my gift from above


The author's comments:
Now I am the happiest girl in the world because my boyfriend is the complete opposite of my ex because I don't have to impress him and he loves me just the way I am and says that nothing I can do will change how he feels about me and I feel the same about him <3

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on Oct. 11 2010 at 6:00 pm
thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry that it's over, smile because it has happened."

this is so good! i loved it. you are such a great writer.

rate/comment on some of my work too if you'd like. great job. keep writing!


Phoenixx GOLD said...
on Oct. 9 2010 at 6:10 pm
Phoenixx GOLD, Toronto, Other
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cute :)

Sounds like your dream come true :)



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