The Final Bow

October 6, 2010
By karissalynb GOLD, Elmore, Ohio
karissalynb GOLD, Elmore, Ohio
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What is it in her that you see you look at her like you looked at me you star with those tantilizing eyes when will SHE see through your lies I knew the hurt would come again thinking we could be more than friends so give me the cold shoulder I don't care no longer will you stroke my hair and tell me hey I think you're cute I'm going to give you the final boot the fire that I thought I craved left my soul now to be saved I'm burned inside oh how it sears I thought we could last for years but now I know I'm just a silly child thinking you could tame the wild love is too strong a word you see love was too strong for you and me the smoke and incense I did yearn but now you stand and watch me burn you broke my heart like I knew you would and I wonder if what I saw in you was good you showed me passion that I never knew and I was ready to melt with you so whatever now you've made your choice never again will you hear my voice.

The author's comments:
So I found out that my ex was trying to get back with his ex and told her that he wasn't seeing anyone and so I wasn't going to be played so I wrote him this to tell him how I felt

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