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Shadowed, and dusky
Heartbroken, crying
Tired of life
Tired of trying
Tired of watching
The fairy tale romance
Tired of being
Unfair

Romeo, Juliet
The names strike a chord
Hopeless romantics
Two lovers doomed
The popular, pretty,
Must have their drama
It's not the right moment
But fate doesn't
Care

But the girl in the shadows
Heartbroken, crying
Robbed of her romance
The boy wasn't trying
The other Juliet
Brought down by her love
Just another girl
Unfair

Rosalind, girl of shadows,
Cry your eyes out
They don't really care
The pretty boy
And the pretty girl
Has anyone told you
That life isn't
Fair?



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AnnaClare This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 18, 2010 at 9:32 am:
I likee this :)
 
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ElizabethY. said...
Oct. 29, 2010 at 9:34 pm:

Pure awesomeness! I seriously love it.

- Bai bai!

 
Luminescence replied...
Oct. 30, 2010 at 4:13 pm :
I know, bai-bai. XD
 
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writergirl13 said...
Oct. 27, 2010 at 8:14 pm:
I like this poem a lot! The poem reflects things from Rosalind's point of view, but this is also your own door to the world of Romeo, Juliet, and Rosalind. Thank you for sharing that door with the rest of us. Please check out and comment on a few of my pieces, particularly my newest one that just got approved, "Maybe the biggest of my life". 
 
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xovanillatwilightxo This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 18, 2010 at 11:59 am:
I love this! It really makes you think from Rosalind's perspective...keep up the good work!:)
 
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starrr7 said...
Oct. 4, 2010 at 4:16 pm:
really expressive, you can feel Rosalind's pain, i like it!
 
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Anonymous01This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 3, 2010 at 6:32 pm:
This is very good and interesting! I love how you give Rosalind a voice after Romeo is blinded by how 'beautiful' Juliet is, even more so then her. all in all its Amazing what u did :DDD 
 
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Danica said...
Oct. 3, 2010 at 2:57 pm:
This is great! I love how its based on such a famous piece of literature. Very creative :) Check out my stuff sometime?
 
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Leokatt said...
Oct. 2, 2010 at 1:03 pm:
Wow this is really good. I always wanted to know what happend to Rosalind after Romeo forgot about her.
 
Mich15 replied...
Feb. 8, 2011 at 5:24 pm :
This is an awesome poem !
I really love it <3
 
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