September 16, 2010
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Houses hold;
The rain will
Work through the walls,
Houses holding - see, it falls
Dripping from the windowsill -
Water rot: inside has all turned mold

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GingerTea This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 1, 2010 at 4:11 pm
I like this, it has vivid imagery.
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