Marlie and Me

September 17, 2010
By DannnyeDavis SILVER, Carrollton, Texas
DannnyeDavis SILVER, Carrollton, Texas
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At first sight I knew we would be forever. I knew we would have times of love and play. I also knew there would be times of despair and unforgiving. She loved me I could tell. I also loved her. She was my first. Then we had to part. I didn't Want it at all. I had a feeling she knew it as well. First time i actually knew how the people in those romantic movies felt. I felt as if I lost a part of me, my heart. We departed

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another story in my life

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on Sep. 29 2010 at 5:41 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

This story of your life is an interesting one, of love and parting. I admit, it doesn't read like a poem, but it's a good piece.


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