Marlie and Me

September 17, 2010
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At first sight I knew we would be forever. I knew we would have times of love and play. I also knew there would be times of despair and unforgiving. She loved me I could tell. I also loved her. She was my first. Then we had to part. I didn't Want it at all. I had a feeling she knew it as well. First time i actually knew how the people in those romantic movies felt. I felt as if I lost a part of me, my heart. We departed

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Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 29, 2010 at 5:41 pm
This story of your life is an interesting one, of love and parting. I admit, it doesn't read like a poem, but it's a good piece.
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