Too Close!

September 10, 2010
By elisianicole101 PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
elisianicole101 PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Nothing ever truely dies, it just transforms into something beautiful


I want to be closer,
so close that i know how many breaths you take,
how many times you blink in a day.
I want to be inseperable,
nothing ever coming between our friendship,
so close that we know everything about eachother,
so close that we...
STOP IT!!!I DON'T WANT THIS!!
your too close,
so close that you see behind my fake smile,
you kno my dreams and ambitions,
so close that you know my deepest secrets.
You know to much,
your getting so close,
that I dont care how close we get,
I can't not care that you know my faults.
You know me,
the real me and not who i pretend to be.
Why can you see through the wall,
that took me soooo long to build!?
Why did I let you get tha close?
It'll only end in blood,
the question is,
who's blood will fade?



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on Sep. 29 2010 at 8:43 pm
elisianicole101 PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Nothing ever truely dies, it just transforms into something beautiful

aww thank you!! and i definatly will! This is like my fav poem i wrote because i wrote it about 1person in preticular and idk! but thanks that really means alot to me(:

on Sep. 29 2010 at 7:58 pm
bound4life4ever PLATINUM, Jamaica, New York
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Never take life seriously. Nobody gets out alive anyway.

OH MY GOD THIS WAS AMAZING! glad i was the 1st to comment... check out my stuff? nd i c u noe olican 16! she is like my fav author on teenink! keep writing!


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