My Sky

September 10, 2010
Your my sky,
when my days are good,
you block out the horrible things.
Your my sun,
and you're not afraid to burn me,
by telling me what i dont want to hear,
but you care enough to make everything bright.
During the night,
when everything is dark and stormy,
you're there even when i can't see you,
you're the stars that make everything,
a little brighter even when,
my world is upside down.

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.AKA. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 10, 2010 at 6:19 pm
Love it. Great job!
elisianicole101 replied...
Dec. 10, 2010 at 11:26 pm
Thank you soooooooooo much(:
alwaysthinkingThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 26, 2010 at 12:54 am
excellent job, its really deep, u should be proud, please comment on my poem i would love to get ur feedback.
alanacarlene said...
Sept. 25, 2010 at 9:06 pm
Omg Elisia! I love it! It gets better everytime i read it! It's beautiful! 5 STARS!
elisianicole101 replied...
Sept. 25, 2010 at 9:22 pm
i feel special now!! lol thanks gurl! i'm glad you like it(:
alanacarlene replied...
Sept. 28, 2010 at 6:01 pm
You're welcome! Can't wait till i can read new poems!
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