My Sky

Your my sky,
when my days are good,
you block out the horrible things.
Your my sun,
and you're not afraid to burn me,
by telling me what i dont want to hear,
but you care enough to make everything bright.
During the night,
when everything is dark and stormy,
you're there even when i can't see you,
you're the stars that make everything,
a little brighter even when,
my world is upside down.





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.AKA. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 10, 2010 at 6:19 pm
Love it. Great job!
 
elisianicole101 replied...
Dec. 10, 2010 at 11:26 pm
Thank you soooooooooo much(:
 
alwaysthinkingThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 26, 2010 at 12:54 am
excellent job, its really deep, u should be proud, please comment on my poem i would love to get ur feedback.
 
alanacarlene said...
Sept. 25, 2010 at 9:06 pm
Omg Elisia! I love it! It gets better everytime i read it! It's beautiful! 5 STARS!
 
elisianicole101 replied...
Sept. 25, 2010 at 9:22 pm
i feel special now!! lol thanks gurl! i'm glad you like it(:
 
alanacarlene replied...
Sept. 28, 2010 at 6:01 pm
You're welcome! Can't wait till i can read new poems!
 
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