Judgmental

September 3, 2010
By Arcaeynn SILVER, Mechanicsburg, Pennsylvania
Arcaeynn SILVER, Mechanicsburg, Pennsylvania
9 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The only thing we're allowed to do is hope that we won't regret the decision we made."


Who are you to judge me
You are the one to blame
For making that mistake
For choosing that path to take


I am my own person
I have my own soul
You and I are different
We both have our own goals

You need to stop cheating
Take responsibility for your own
I am no one to you
My face, I refuse to loan

Stop right there
Don’t take another step
Go backwards, start anew
Don’t make life harder for you

Be a good kid
Open your eyes
Do your homework
Strengthen your ties


Make new friends
Join our song
Dance and by joyful
All day long


You don’t need to
Reopen the past
You’re your own journey
You’re your own cast


Now change your ways
The path is wide open
Switch your direction
Make a revolution


Don’t be dull
Come and see sense
Relax your shoulders
Don’t be so tense

Everything’s there, you know
All you need is here
Alright, let me help you
Why don’t we be a pair


But first, I must ask
Do you even care?


The author's comments:
Just a poem I made in school. Hope you guys know what it means?

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on Sep. 25 2010 at 10:31 pm
Arcaeynn SILVER, Mechanicsburg, Pennsylvania
9 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The only thing we're allowed to do is hope that we won't regret the decision we made."

Thanks a lot! I'm really glad that you liked my work!

on Sep. 21 2010 at 3:40 pm
JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND, Westerlo, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"I'd rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I'm not"
"Somewhere betweeen us talking, you saying I deserve better, and you making me laugh when I wanted to cry, I fell in love with you."

Wow...all I can say is wow. There is something about your work thats so...from the heart. Can't wait to read the rest!! Please, for all our sake, KEEP WRITING!! You've got talent!!

on Sep. 19 2010 at 7:08 pm
Arcaeynn SILVER, Mechanicsburg, Pennsylvania
9 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The only thing we're allowed to do is hope that we won't regret the decision we made."

Thanks so much! Sorry, no romance involved here!

on Sep. 19 2010 at 6:43 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
40 articles 2 photos 1634 comments

Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

Wow, I was pretty far off. What you said makes perfect sense.

on Sep. 19 2010 at 5:55 pm
Arcaeynn SILVER, Mechanicsburg, Pennsylvania
9 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The only thing we're allowed to do is hope that we won't regret the decision we made."

Thanks for commenting!

The inspiration for the poem was brought by the fact that a lot of people in this world have no idea how to be ambitious, and judge themselves too freely with others. The important thing to know is that you are who you are, and that you shouldn't judge yourself to what others do. 

The picture I first get when I reread my poem is a girl student telling another student- a lazy, foolish boy,- how to be a GOOD student.


on Sep. 19 2010 at 3:50 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
40 articles 2 photos 1634 comments

Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

This is a very well written poem; I applaud you for writing it so skilfully. Forgive me if I misinterpret, is it a tale of a disintegrated relationship? One is having trouble letting go, the other says 'Move on, will you?' I would love to know. Well done.




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