August 16, 2010
Roses drained of red
Violets faded blue
Beauty lost its beauty
When it left with you.

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SMWells said...
Nov. 10, 2010 at 6:58 am
Not hard to tell why other people didn't coment. They don't like realisim.
clairexaudrey This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 10, 2010 at 9:47 am

Well I had this on a forum, so people commented there. It takes a while for poems to get comments when they're actually submitted.

And surprisingly enough, it took me a long time to write this. I wanted to get the wording just right, simple as it is.

SMWells replied...
Nov. 10, 2010 at 10:01 am
Well you did a wonderfull job. My dificulty is that actual submitions take fovever to go through. So I put several on the forum to.
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