Evanesce

August 16, 2010
By clairexaudrey PLATINUM, Bethel, Connecticut
clairexaudrey PLATINUM, Bethel, Connecticut
41 articles 3 photos 73 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most beautiful people we have known are those who have known defeat, known suffering, known struggle, known loss, and have found their way out of the depths. These persons have an appreciation, a sensitivity, and an understanding of life that fills them with compassion, gentleness, and a deep loving concern. Beautiful people do not just happen."
-Elizabeth Kubler Ross


Roses drained of red
Violets faded blue
Beauty lost its beauty
When it left with you.



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on Nov. 10 2010 at 10:01 am
SMWells PLATINUM, Carlisle, South Carolina
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Some truths best left unspoken.

Well you did a wonderfull job. My dificulty is that actual submitions take fovever to go through. So I put several on the forum to.

on Nov. 10 2010 at 9:47 am
clairexaudrey PLATINUM, Bethel, Connecticut
41 articles 3 photos 73 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most beautiful people we have known are those who have known defeat, known suffering, known struggle, known loss, and have found their way out of the depths. These persons have an appreciation, a sensitivity, and an understanding of life that fills them with compassion, gentleness, and a deep loving concern. Beautiful people do not just happen."
-Elizabeth Kubler Ross

Well I had this on a forum, so people commented there. It takes a while for poems to get comments when they're actually submitted.

And surprisingly enough, it took me a long time to write this. I wanted to get the wording just right, simple as it is.


on Nov. 10 2010 at 6:58 am
SMWells PLATINUM, Carlisle, South Carolina
22 articles 0 photos 294 comments

Favorite Quote:
Some truths best left unspoken.

Not hard to tell why other people didn't coment. They don't like realisim.


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