Blinded Hope

August 22, 2010
By I_am_the_only_me GOLD, Bakersfield, California
I_am_the_only_me GOLD, Bakersfield, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Risk more than others think is safe. Care more than others think is wise. Dream more than others think is practical. Expect more than others think is possible. " ~ Cadet Maxim
that's an awesome quote learn it, love it, live by it.


Words in the moonlight deceive them.
It is a lie.
They fall deep within.
They think without it they'd die.

A faulty heart in the moonlight snaps them to real.
It was a lie something they didn't know.
They didn't say what they truly feel.
which leaves the hurt to only grow.

The fear of heartache and heartbreak never left their mind.
They took a chance.
Totally left their fear behind.
A decision that will only worsen, not enhance.

They wonder if it was worth it.
the pain of heartbreak and misery.
It's something they will never forget.
It was a hope for something they could only see.

They had failed.
Hope was a train from above.
It had derailed.
The thing they couldn't have was love.



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on Oct. 12 2010 at 11:50 pm
I_am_the_only_me GOLD, Bakersfield, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Risk more than others think is safe. Care more than others think is wise. Dream more than others think is practical. Expect more than others think is possible. " ~ Cadet Maxim
that's an awesome quote learn it, love it, live by it.

Thanks, well it's hard to say. I thought about how a lot of people are getting hurt nowadays, an I figured I should write about a different topic, one that a lot of teens are writting about. I try to vary topics. Most teens teens think that they love someone, but some teens don't understand love like i do. For them it's a different 'lover' often for them, an until you get to know someone an like them for who they truely are is when you should date them. So, anyways I wrote about a relationship where everything that can go wrong did. It's really hard to say my exatly what I was thinking when I wrote it. :D hope I answered your question =]

bilbogirl GOLD said...
on Oct. 4 2010 at 6:40 pm
bilbogirl GOLD, Townsend, Delaware
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If you cant rock it, dont even bother trying.

This is really beautiful, i have a feeling that you'll be popular before long on this website. You've definately got talent. What inspired you to do this?

on Sep. 17 2010 at 1:06 am
I_am_the_only_me GOLD, Bakersfield, California
15 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Risk more than others think is safe. Care more than others think is wise. Dream more than others think is practical. Expect more than others think is possible. " ~ Cadet Maxim
that's an awesome quote learn it, love it, live by it.

If you read this please comment. I can't help writting an I wonder what people think about my poems. I an farely new to this site.


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