When I'm Down

Everyone around me keeps falling in love,
Is someone sending me a message from above?,
Maybe loves not meant to be,
Maybe loves just not for me,

I'm supose to be happy all the time,
But why is crying such a crime?,
Everyone's used to seeing one side of me,
They don't know what all I can be,

Making people smile is what I do best,
Smile and be happy; forget the rest,
No one is sad for long when I'm around,
For happiness can always be found,

But when I'm weak and feeling down,
Will everyone leave; will they be around?,
To offer me a caring hand,
To pick me up and help me stand,

Who can comfort me when I'm all alone,
Is everyones heart made of stone?,
I've been there when a friends in need,
But will they return to me the same noble deed?,

When I've fallen down,
Will anyone ever come around?





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Ryalynn said...
Nov. 5, 2010 at 4:53 pm
OMG OMG OMG OMG I just wanna print this and give it to all my so called friends...... I ABSOLUTLY LOVED THIS ON OYU SOULD EMAIL ME IT
 
fragileblackorchid replied...
Nov. 6, 2010 at 10:22 am
lolz thanks alot, i wrote some more poems too a couple days ago that im going to be posting so keep a look out for them:) but i dont give anyone my poems sorry
 
Ryalynn replied...
Nov. 6, 2010 at 6:14 pm
i love it though KEEP IT UP AND YOUR SURELY BECOME FAMOUS
 
fragileblackorchid said...
Sept. 2, 2010 at 8:34 pm
wooo first comment lol just kidding anyways most of my poems r love poems i'm not sure why considering i've never been in love but thanks to everyone who reads them and leaves me feedback:)
 
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