July 31, 2010
By , Scotland, United Kingdom
'goodbye' he said, as he left
walking down the stairs.
tears streaming down her face,
people she didnt even know could see she cared.
'i do love you though'
he said, as he went.
and although she denied it then, she loved him too.

The others dont understand,
daddys not coming home.
her palm pressed against the window as he drives away;
she'd never felt so alone.
it was all her mothers fault - she would scream.
daddy was her hero.
she hoped when she woke up, this would be just a dream.

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Lauraaa said...
Aug. 29, 2010 at 7:18 am
i wrote this poem and its all suppose to ryhme but the website owners changed some of the lines, HOW ANNOYING!
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