Did you ever care?

July 28, 2010
By Voodoo_Baby SILVER, Uniontown, Ohio
Voodoo_Baby SILVER, Uniontown, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"It's Voodoo Baby!"


Did you ever care,
Did you ever see,
How much love was there,
Between you and me,

The time we spent together,
Was it just a waste,
Did it even matter,
Our memories erased,

Why did you let me go,
Was it so easy to do,
From here it seems so,
Or is it not getting through,

Were you trying to tell me before,
Were you trying to escape,
Was it just more,
Than you could ever take,

Was it me or was it you,
Do you even care,
Or were you just passing through,
Were you ever aware,

You didn't even notice,
The passion I fed to you,
Our love I thought was bliss,
But it passed, it's true,

Did you ever care,
Did you ever see,
How much love was there,
Between you and me,

Were you so blind,
Or could you really see,
All that I left behind,
Was everything to me,

You hurt me so,
But I bet,
You don't even know,
How much yet,

So go on leave me here,
Just go ahead,
Leave me to drown in every tear,
For you my dear I've shed,

Because you've been gone,
I have been dead...Goodbye love,
And hello sweet pain,
I don't care what you say...

It's not like you ever cared anyway...


The author's comments:
Sometimes a heart and soul can get broken to the point that you can't ever care ever again.

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on Dec. 28 2010 at 8:04 pm
Voodoo_Baby SILVER, Uniontown, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"It's Voodoo Baby!"

Thank you for the wonderful feedback

 


MDMcG SILVER said...
on Sep. 14 2010 at 7:38 pm
MDMcG SILVER, Uniontown, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Books are the quietest and most constant of friends; they are the most accessible and wisest of counselors, and the most patient of teachers." -Charles W. Eliot

This is truly amazing.  You have a way with words and certainly know how to grab someone and yank them right in.  That was marvelous! 


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