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Did you ever care,
Did you ever see,
How much love was there,
Between you and me,

The time we spent together,
Was it just a waste,
Did it even matter,
Our memories erased,

Why did you let me go,
Was it so easy to do,
From here it seems so,
Or is it not getting through,

Were you trying to tell me before,
Were you trying to escape,
Was it just more,
Than you could ever take,

Was it me or was it you,
Do you even care,
Or were you just passing through,
Were you ever aware,

You didn't even notice,
The passion I fed to you,
Our love I thought was bliss,
But it passed, it's true,

Did you ever care,
Did you ever see,
How much love was there,
Between you and me,

Were you so blind,
Or could you really see,
All that I left behind,
Was everything to me,

You hurt me so,
But I bet,
You don't even know,
How much yet,

So go on leave me here,
Just go ahead,
Leave me to drown in every tear,
For you my dear I've shed,

Because you've been gone,
I have been dead...Goodbye love,
And hello sweet pain,
I don't care what you say...

It's not like you ever cared anyway...





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MDMcG said...
Sept. 14, 2010 at 7:38 pm
This is truly amazing.  You have a way with words and certainly know how to grab someone and yank them right in.  That was marvelous! 
 
Voodoo_Baby replied...
Dec. 28, 2010 at 8:04 pm

Thank you for the wonderful feedback

 

 
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