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July 20, 2010
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We're good most of the time,
Best friends usually.
But you have some days
Where you won't talk to me.
I don't know why
You won't let me hold you
And make you smile,
Make your heart renew.
When you're unhappy,
My heart does tear.
You might think I'm sappy,
But i really do care.





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Villangel said...
Dec. 15, 2011 at 6:43 pm
This poem opened my mind a bit. It was like I could see my best friend as I was reading this, looking at me the same way you wrote about your best friend. After reading this I think I need to cutt her some slack. Great job by the way.! You always have really great poems.
 
gymbabe This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 17, 2010 at 7:58 pm
Awww. That was really sweet, I can relate.  You expressed the feelings of a best friend very poetically.
 
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