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June 21, 2010
By sam013 DIAMOND, San Diego, California
sam013 DIAMOND, San Diego, California
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Heels are clicking
The seconds are ticking
Trying to get home



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sam013 DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 1 2010 at 10:22 am
sam013 DIAMOND, San Diego, California
63 articles 28 photos 33 comments
thanks. and yes, it is a haiku

on Aug. 31 2010 at 8:05 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

Oh wait... this isn't a haiku, is it? I'm sorry, I'm just tired. Still a nice poem with good rhythm.

on Aug. 31 2010 at 8:03 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
40 articles 2 photos 1635 comments

Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

At first read, I thought this to be a very straightforward poem. Like most haikus, it describes the moment. However, I'm curious... is there a deeper meaning than being in a hurry? No matter your answer, it's a good poem.


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