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Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 31, 2010 at 8:03 pm
At first read, I thought this to be a very straightforward poem. Like most haikus, it describes the moment. However, I'm curious... is there a deeper meaning than being in a hurry? No matter your answer, it's a good poem.
 
Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 31, 2010 at 8:05 pm
Oh wait... this isn't a haiku, is it? I'm sorry, I'm just tired. Still a nice poem with good rhythm.
 
sam013 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 1, 2010 at 10:22 am
thanks. and yes, it is a haiku
 
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