Broken Clock :)

July 11, 2010
By KristaSymone BRONZE, Hillsboro, Texas
KristaSymone BRONZE, Hillsboro, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"If You Want Something You Never Had Before, You've Got To Do Something You Have Never Done Before." :)

To My Left,
There's An Empty Chair.
If You Were Here,
You'd Be Sitting There.
When I Look Down,
There Should Be Four.
But Only Two Feet Are On The Floor.
Can't Seem To Dismiss;
This Emptyness.
It's Like A Tick,
Without A Tock.
The Sound Of A Broken Clock.
Piglet If Pooh Died.
Bonny Without Clyde.
Can't Help But Wonder,
How Hard They Cried.?

The author's comments:
To My Best Friend Jessica F.

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on Aug. 9 2010 at 7:31 pm
wishing4thebest2day GOLD, Redmond, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"Giving will ultimately make you happier in life. It is rewarding for you to brighten up someone's day." -Anonymous

I loved this poem. It was very sad, however, I enjoy reading sad poems. The words you wrote seemed to be true and real with soul, not fake and emotionless. This poem was amazing and you should keep writing! :)

on Aug. 6 2010 at 9:54 am
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

I simply loved this, although it was sad. Loss is a sad and complicated thing, but you described it well with this poem.

on Aug. 5 2010 at 9:29 pm SILVER, Spring Lake Park, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"Excuses are like BUTT HOLES, they stink and everyone has one." ~Mr.Bogle (my math teacher)

It's Amazing. And I can relate real easily to this :'( I cried.


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