I am.

June 24, 2010
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When you don't know
when you have to ask,
When you want to be told.
When i ask you,
Who you are.

Your never quite sure
Of your purpous.
You really don't know
The grand scheme of it all.

I know, I know, I know.
It's all a scam.

What you call your life,
Who you call your friends,
What you call your reason,
When you call your time.

It's all a scam to me,
Your a big lie to me,
And you call me a freak?

Well at least i know
Who it is i am.

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laurathewise said...
Sept. 5, 2010 at 6:22 pm
Heyyyy this is great I just have to correct your grammar! lol...2nd stanza 1st line "Your" should be "you're" (contraction of you are, whereas your, like in the 2nd line of that stanza, is the possessive of you). Also in the 2nd stanza, "purpous" should be "purpose" (spellcheck is a wonderful thing, my friend). That's pretty much it...Really liked this poem, might favorite it!
EmmaNemma said...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 12:19 pm
I know what you're talking about and you described well. The way you wrote this it could be song lyrics. It's cool.
pkcPKC replied...
Aug. 24, 2010 at 6:30 pm
It was good, though it could have more flow.
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