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Blood Tears & Hate

Blood dripping all over the place.
Dried tears on my face.
Razor on the bathroom floor.
I don't feel any pain no more.
Looking around to see the damage i have done.
This time there was no place to run.
My passionate anger & hatered has found me.
I stop fighting through & just let those emotions flow & take over me.
They lefted me scarred up with busted blood veins.
All this fustration took me out of misery & pain.
Leaving me with this beautiful word always to remember.
When i saw my creation for the first timeit looked nice & tender.
So now when you look down at my arm you'll see.
All the pain, misery, hurt, decieving, mistreating, abondonment you put me through.
If you really want to know who did this to me..
Just look in your mirror & you'll see...
It was YOU!!!!!!



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darkprincess said...
Aug. 9, 2010 at 1:40 am

This is an amazing poem. I can honestly say i can relate to this. I love the ending, and the whole poem was great.

:D

oh, thanks for the comment!

 
ShytoyaB replied...
Aug. 11, 2010 at 7:42 pm
thanks so much
 
Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 8, 2010 at 12:00 pm
This is very sad, but I found myself liking it. I could tell that it was written with passion, and for that I applaud you. The poem was finished off nicely.
 
ShytoyaB replied...
Aug. 11, 2010 at 7:44 pm
i really appreciate that
 
ShytoyaB said...
Jul. 21, 2010 at 10:24 pm
please give feedback.......thanks
 
Marissa232 replied...
Aug. 6, 2010 at 9:17 pm
Very sad...
 
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