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Today the sun is shinig,but my skies are gray.Cold rain is pouring over me,
where i lay.
The birds are chirping in a way,
like their really calling my name.
My heart is soaked,soaked in despair.
Eveyoneis looking at me,
as though they care.
They stare,
i stare.
While in my head i'm screaming,
"LIFE ISN'T FAIR!"
I turn my back toward them.
and close my eyelids because i know it's my time,
to die.
I leaned over the edge,
and let the darkness swallow my soul,
while the rest of my body fell and went cold.
Today was my day..............
to go.



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ThatBlondGuy This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 30, 2010 at 8:24 pm:

Interesting poem. A bit glum, but that's quite all right. Some of the best poems are. The last few lines are definitely very good.

You might want to proofread a bit. But besides that, this is a good piece of work!

 
chocolatedaii This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Dec. 1, 2010 at 7:34 am :
Thanks for the comment and advice!
 
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