Death

June 11, 2010
By Inherinerd GOLD, Ashland, Ohio
Inherinerd GOLD, Ashland, Ohio
16 articles 9 photos 302 comments

Favorite Quote:
A word to the wise ain't nessecary it's the stupid ones that need the advise


Death


Emptiness surrounds me
As darkness grips my slow beating heart
I struggle to hold on

My heartbeat is loudly pounding
White lights beneath my closed eyes dart
My weary consciousness withdrawn

Where has gone the beauty?
The warm touch of flesh, the violet's amaranthine bloom
Gone here at the end of all things

Fear, relentlessly screaming
Entombs me as I near my doom
And tears away my worldly bindings

One last whisper in my ear
As my vision blurs in hues of red
The fire of earth departs coldly

"You have to let go my dear"
The whisper consumes all thoughts of dread
I relinquish hold and am set free


The author's comments:
I wrote this for a school project.

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on Jul. 14 2010 at 3:04 pm
Inherinerd GOLD, Ashland, Ohio
16 articles 9 photos 302 comments

Favorite Quote:
A word to the wise ain't nessecary it's the stupid ones that need the advise

thank you!!!

Birder SILVER said...
on Jul. 12 2010 at 11:07 am
Birder SILVER, Waterboro, Maine
6 articles 22 photos 104 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Do unto others as you would have them do unto you, unless they do unto you first, then open a can of unto on to them."

"Obey the ninja."

"What's that? And why does it say snickle tickle?"

This is very good, you're a very talented person! I love the use of vocabulary you use, it makes it all the better. I hope to read more of your stuff. BYE!




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