Shiver

June 11, 2010
By Inherinerd GOLD, Ashland, Ohio
Inherinerd GOLD, Ashland, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
A word to the wise ain't nessecary it's the stupid ones that need the advise


I linger in this moment
Where winter tries to find me
it takes what is mine
How I long to be free
Clawing at my skin it gives me new flesh
A monster in this world
I have only one comfort now
She's my summer girl.


The author's comments:
This is inspired by the novel SHIVER

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on Aug. 23 2010 at 2:36 pm
thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry that it's over, smile because it has happened."

its really cool that this is inspired by a book. i read that book a while ago and i really liked it! great job on this(:

on Jul. 27 2010 at 2:35 pm
Inherinerd GOLD, Ashland, Ohio
16 articles 9 photos 302 comments

Favorite Quote:
A word to the wise ain't nessecary it's the stupid ones that need the advise

Actually i didn't realize that i had done that. But thank you for pointing that out!!! Andno i haven't had the chance to read the second one yet

on Jul. 27 2010 at 2:31 pm
sleeplessdreamer PLATINUM, Raleigh, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"I have always wanted to write in such a way that people say, 'I have always thought that but never found the words for it.'" -anonymous

Haha. I think we have a lot in common, because I love the book Shiver. Maggie (can't spell her last name) is a genius author. (Have you read her new one Linger... very good sequel??)

So my advice: This is so close to the book it's nearly copywriting. Sorry. You stole whole lines from the book. She's my summer girl. For example, that's directly out of the book. BE CAREFUL!!! It didn't seem like this piece was inspired by the book, but taken from the book.


on Jul. 21 2010 at 6:53 pm
Inherinerd GOLD, Ashland, Ohio
16 articles 9 photos 302 comments

Favorite Quote:
A word to the wise ain't nessecary it's the stupid ones that need the advise

Thank you! And shiver is a wonderful book!!

ELM522 DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 21 2010 at 6:31 pm
ELM522 DIAMOND, Selden, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"All those other girls, well they're beautiful, but would they write a song for you?"-"Hey Stephen" by Taylor Swift

I'm not familiar with the novel "Shiver," but this is very insightful and witty!




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