Shiver

I linger in this moment
Where winter tries to find me
it takes what is mine
How I long to be free
Clawing at my skin it gives me new flesh
A monster in this world
I have only one comfort now
She's my summer girl.





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thewriteidea This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 23, 2010 at 2:36 pm
its really cool that this is inspired by a book. i read that book a while ago and i really liked it! great job on this(:
 
sleeplessdreamer said...
Jul. 27, 2010 at 2:31 pm

Haha. I think we have a lot in common, because I love the book Shiver. Maggie (can't spell her last name) is a genius author. (Have you read her new one Linger... very good sequel??)

So my advice: This is so close to the book it's nearly copywriting. Sorry. You stole whole lines from the book. She's my summer girl. For example, that's directly out of the book. BE CAREFUL!!! It didn't seem like this piece was inspired by the book, but taken from the book.

 
Inherinerd replied...
Jul. 27, 2010 at 2:35 pm
Actually i didn't realize that i had done that. But thank you for pointing that out!!! Andno i haven't had the chance to read the second one yet
 
ELM522 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 21, 2010 at 6:31 pm
I'm not familiar with the novel "Shiver," but this is very insightful and witty!
 
Inherinerd replied...
Jul. 21, 2010 at 6:53 pm
Thank you! And shiver is a wonderful book!!
 
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