I am the one...

June 13, 2010
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All this hurt in me
I hate it so much.
It only makes me feel
Like a bigger screw up.
It's funny how I
Can laugh and smile.
And I just sit here
And I'm dying all the while.
I want to scream
And find a way out.
But nobody will come
No matter how loud I shout.
It's and endless circle
With you and your games.
I guess I should know
You'll never change your nways.
I wish there was
A different route.
But suicide seems
To be the only way out.
When you think about it
It isn't that bad.
Sometimes I think it'd
Be better to be dead.
I reach for help
But none of it comes.
And then I finally think
I am the one.
The one to fall
The one to fail.
The one to never
Be able to prevail.
I am the one to
Try and try.
But I'll be the one
Who is first to die.

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Yoyo96 said...
Aug. 10, 2010 at 9:00 pm
WOW! This is a great poem. Melissa, u are amazing with words, and u are a better poet than I am. This piece right here reminds me just how talented you are. i love it :)
I_Am_Me96 replied...
Aug. 10, 2010 at 9:03 pm
Thanks Best friend. And you're a better poet when it comes to free verse and really getting points across. The only thing I can do it ryhme. :P But thank you. :) I appreciate it. :) :) UR THE BEST! :D
Yoyo96 replied...
Aug. 10, 2010 at 9:11 pm
aww thanks! u are right about that. hey why dont u email me?
I_Am_Me96 replied...
Aug. 10, 2010 at 9:13 pm
Your welcome. And I jsut sent one, and I sent the other one a while ago about you going to the concert and that it is awesome. I just sent one. It's the aol one, right?
I_Am_Me96 replied...
Aug. 10, 2010 at 10:45 pm
I FOUND YOUR PERRY THE PLATYPUS SHIRT!! It's perry disquised as a beach bunny. XD It's hilarious. Imma get it cuz it's awesome. :D
Aelita said...
Jul. 27, 2010 at 3:24 pm
That's very grim.  It was pretty good, except that using the term "screw up" in an otherwise archaic poem is generally a no no. 
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