The Truth

June 12, 2010
I thought it was all love
now i'm trapped inside
no where to go
nothing to see
of how i lied my self alseep
I knew i couldnt hide
so i chose to believe
the words you said to me
with no meaning
trying to find hope in such
a simple means
was very weak of me indeed





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Poet_in_Motion This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 12, 2010 at 5:27 pm
That was really good! I especially like the line "how I lied myself to sleep". :) <3
 
ryanthebrat replied...
Sept. 8, 2011 at 9:29 pm
Thank you for your comment.
 
timevampire This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 12, 2010 at 4:04 pm
"was very weak of me indeed" I love that. simple but so natural to what we all feel and fill our emptyness with. good job:)
 
C0olBeans said...
Jul. 11, 2010 at 5:59 pm
Very relatable..i liked it...if you could check out my poem on the forum page called boys boys boys i would be greatful
 
ryanthebrat replied...
Jul. 13, 2010 at 2:31 pm
sure no problem.
 
ryanthebrat replied...
Jul. 13, 2010 at 3:15 pm
How come I can't find it.
 
Dominicangirl said...
Jul. 11, 2010 at 3:37 pm
Wow really gud, could relate
 
Daydreamer14 said...
Jul. 11, 2010 at 3:12 pm
Really good! It flowed really well:)
 
Rain777 said...
Jul. 11, 2010 at 2:03 pm
awesome!:D
 
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