The Truth

June 12, 2010
By Avenging_Angel PLATINUM, Cleburne, Texas
Avenging_Angel PLATINUM, Cleburne, Texas
33 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You never really know your friends from your enemies until the ice breaks. "- Eskimo


I thought it was all love
now i'm trapped inside
no where to go
nothing to see
of how i lied my self alseep
I knew i couldnt hide
so i chose to believe
the words you said to me
with no meaning
trying to find hope in such
a simple means
was very weak of me indeed



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on Sep. 8 2011 at 9:29 pm
Avenging_Angel PLATINUM, Cleburne, Texas
33 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You never really know your friends from your enemies until the ice breaks. "- Eskimo

Thank you for your comment.

on Jul. 13 2010 at 3:15 pm
Avenging_Angel PLATINUM, Cleburne, Texas
33 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You never really know your friends from your enemies until the ice breaks. "- Eskimo

How come I can't find it.

on Jul. 13 2010 at 2:31 pm
Avenging_Angel PLATINUM, Cleburne, Texas
33 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You never really know your friends from your enemies until the ice breaks. "- Eskimo

sure no problem.

on Jul. 12 2010 at 5:27 pm
Poet_in_Motion PLATINUM, Sharon, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Love one another." –George Harrison (his last words)

"and down they forgot as up they grew" –e.e. cummings

"The sea is just a wetter version of the sky..." –Regina Spektor

That was really good! I especially like the line "how I lied myself to sleep". :) <3

on Jul. 12 2010 at 4:04 pm
timevampire GOLD, Bellville, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Quoting yourself makes you an ass.

"was very weak of me indeed" I love that. simple but so natural to what we all feel and fill our emptyness with. good job:)

on Jul. 11 2010 at 5:59 pm
C0olBeans BRONZE, Willingboro, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
‘If you don't like something, change it. If you can't change it, change your attitude. Don't complain.’

Very relatable..i liked it...if you could check out my poem on the forum page called boys boys boys i would be greatful

on Jul. 11 2010 at 3:37 pm
Sileron-evol PLATINUM, Providence, Rhode Island
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Favorite Quote:
"we are captives of our own identities, living in prisons of our own creation"

Wow really gud, could relate

on Jul. 11 2010 at 3:12 pm
Daydreamer14 PLATINUM, Norman, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
"Reality leaves a lot to the imagination." - John Lennon

Really good! It flowed really well:)

Rain777 GOLD said...
on Jul. 11 2010 at 2:03 pm
Rain777 GOLD, ?Town, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Be yourself, an original is always better than a copy! :D

awesome!:D




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