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Sing with me, that song we sang together
Breathe with me, like it’ll last forever
Dawn shifts to dusk
Without a clue
That we’re still here; knowing not what to do
You sleep--silent and still
So strong in the middle, so brave in the end
A year’s past,
Yet the memories last,
I could not bring myself to
Let go of a last laughing time we held
Where you were tired, just back from work
I came late, finishing up homework
Late night--last call
You were stuck, but who knows it all?
Breathing, not living
Two years past and you are still gone
And I’m wondering if you’re listening
As I listen to our song





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Ellawind said...
Dec. 23, 2010 at 4:30 pm
Wow, it flows very prettily! It sounds like a song! No criticism for this one, it's perfect. :)
 
thepreechyteenager said...
Sept. 9, 2010 at 7:00 am
Very beautiful :)  I love how you related everything to the song.
 
kmarie said...
Jul. 10, 2010 at 11:14 pm
I love this! It's great! : )
 
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