June 3, 2010
By lacrosseguy26 SILVER, Huntsville, Alabama
lacrosseguy26 SILVER, Huntsville, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
"A man can pick a fight with anyone, it takes a real man to walk away from a fight."
- Coach Woods, 8th grade P.E. coach

More beautiful than a rose at dawn,
More beautiful than any picture an artist had drawn.
Standing in the light with her beautiful brown hair,
If only her beauty the world could share.
I’ve not once seen her wear a frown,
My entire world she’s turned upside down.
More beautiful than the sun on a summer’s day,
If only these words she could hear me say.
She picks up my soul and throws it in the ocean,
She sends my heart about hers in a constant motion.
If only she could be here standing next to me,
Then perhaps she would finally see.
The amount of worth she means to me.

The author's comments:
My poem was inspired by this girl in Australia that I really, really like but it's impossible to be with her cause we live so far away. I wrote it her in hopes one day, ill be able to afford a ticket to go and visit her. Her name is Jacqui

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