The Pain That I Live

June 1, 2010
By windswift DIAMOND, Arvada, Colorado
windswift DIAMOND, Arvada, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
let it burn, suffering teaches the soul; let it grow, love nourishes the heart.


To much time has come to pass,
I feel piontless, like a blade of grass,
My life has led to nowhere at all,
I feel trapped, like going down an endless hall,
Its hard to live right now, with so much pain,
I feel lost, like one who's lost there every gain,
Who could ever imagine how I feel,
deep within my very veins,
Some wounds are so bad they will never heal,
What has healed, are the scars of my pains,
I have no reason to stay alive right now,
I feel like killing myself,despite lifes vow,
My wounds hurt me, from them pain flows,
I feel sorroful, and yet no-one knows,
They can't understand the pain that I live,
I feel, dark, but I will always forgive,
I cannot take anymore pain,
Or I will kill myself, finnaly be slain,
I hate my life, all it is is hell,
Deep below the surface, past my shell,
I hate myself, want to end my existance,
I've lost everything, even my resistance,
And there's only one thing that will bring me above,
That is to be with the one I love.


The author's comments:
I wrote this piece on 5/30/10, on a night when, like so many others, I was very emotional, and I decided to write it out on paper, and this is what turned out.

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on Oct. 14 2011 at 9:19 pm
windswift DIAMOND, Arvada, Colorado
80 articles 0 photos 91 comments

Favorite Quote:
let it burn, suffering teaches the soul; let it grow, love nourishes the heart.

the strength you speak of is not easy to find, but lately i have taken that strength and been able to rise up, like you suggested.  thank you, i have moved on from that way of life since then, and found something better.

on Aug. 27 2011 at 6:21 pm
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The goal isn't to live forever, but create something that will."
"If you wanna go, baby let's go; if you wanna rock, I'm ready to roll.''
"No one ever said it'd be easy. They just said it'd be worth it." <3

This is incredible. It gave me goosebumps. The last few lines are just the perfect ending. I'm so sorry if you ever feel this way, and I hope you find the strength within yourself to rise above it. From whatt I can see in your writing, you definetely have that strength. You're a very gifted writer, too.:)




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