Predetermined fate

May 29, 2010
By distressed_cinderella PLATINUM, San Leandro, California
distressed_cinderella PLATINUM, San Leandro, California
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Favorite Quote:
" You can't make something stay that wants to go. You can only love what you have while you have it"


It hit me
I don't know exactly when
maybe it came out
when you dated my best friend
I love you

Everyone talks about us
and we just laugh it off
but, they seem to have a point
that I can't deny anymore

Because I am a yoyo on your string
I always come back around to you
it's my predetermined fate
and there's nothing I can do

I want to cut these strings
and tear myself away
but, I'm afraid of losing you
and I don't want to mess with fate

I want this forever
and I don't want this at all
don't ask me to marry you
just be there when I fall

When I am broken, standing by
your house, not sure what to do
accept the love you have for me?
hide the love I have for you?

my hand is at your door
consider this my soundless knock


The author's comments:
This is about having a best friend, who wants to be more than freinds. It's about being afraid of confinment with the person who's always been there.

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on Aug. 20 2010 at 11:27 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

youre hilarious captain. keep writing! you know....I really love last two lines...

on Aug. 20 2010 at 7:34 pm
distressed_cinderella PLATINUM, San Leandro, California
20 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
" You can't make something stay that wants to go. You can only love what you have while you have it"

whoot whoot =D Thanks (doing my happy dance )

on Aug. 19 2010 at 6:26 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

this is really awesome. I love the last two lines. 5 stars captain. do your dance.

on Aug. 14 2010 at 3:45 pm
distressed_cinderella PLATINUM, San Leandro, California
20 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
" You can't make something stay that wants to go. You can only love what you have while you have it"

Thank you for commenting! I am glad you could relate to my poem.

sambam SILVER said...
on Jul. 22 2010 at 10:02 pm
sambam SILVER, Pomona, California
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Favorite Quote:
fly like a thestral. away from this place.

i really like it, it kinda expresses my thoughts, but my poems are more "i wish you'd be always there for me, so marry me". not exactly how you say it. but i still feel that way.

LOVED IT.





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