The Wind's Whisper

May 30, 2010
Remember those days and weeks
Where snowflakes kissed so gently your cheeks,
And the world stopped hurling, if only for a moment,
And stared in awe of your angel-inspired tint.

Remember the nights in the fields so chilled,
Our stomaches and hearts hot cocoa-filled.
We laughed until the yule-tide commenced,
And then we laughed some more despite our parents.

We sung of joy, and actually felt it;
Cold or clear nights couldn't condemn our spirit!
The snow almost came only to show you off,
Proclaiming your grace in the wind's whisper so soft.

Now oh so quickly the wind stole you away,
And I search for those solstices day after day;
Never to find them, only to look
For the priceless gift that the wind's whisper took.

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Stormythrone said...
Aug. 15, 2010 at 7:29 pm
This is amazing and haunting (in a good way) it really puts the reader write there. I love it! Keep writing!
Stormythrone replied...
Aug. 15, 2010 at 7:30 pm
right* if I could spell ><
wild-free said...
Aug. 11, 2010 at 1:18 pm

Beautiful. I could really feel the chill of the entire poem-of winter and lost love. It felt very personal to the reader. Again, great job. You have a very strong talent!


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squidzinkpen said...
Aug. 10, 2010 at 1:44 pm
This is fabulous! You're an amazing writer, really, you are!
sky_is_womb said...
Jul. 13, 2010 at 5:55 pm
the last stanza was beautiful! good job!
A_Dreamer said...
Jul. 12, 2010 at 6:50 pm
I love the beginning and the ending! I have to agree with the comment below me, the last stanza is my favorite too. :)
Supernova7 said...
Jul. 8, 2010 at 4:48 pm
It's pretty good:) I loved the last stanza. could you comment on my work?
Jynxx said...
Jul. 6, 2010 at 1:43 pm

i really liked this poem because 1. winter is by far my favorite season, and 2) it was written really well!

the last stanza was like the grand finale of the poem and i loved that part a lot. Awesome job!

i.ll_be_fine_899 said...
Jun. 28, 2010 at 8:21 am
whoa this poem was fantastic!!! and wen u mention hot cocoa u really took me back!!^^ the poem also really had a goood ending. awesome work there :)
riley... replied...
Jun. 28, 2010 at 6:51 pm
why thank you
Meganchrisitne replied...
Jul. 19, 2010 at 9:56 am
I really really like this. It captures the essance of winter very well
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