fish wish MAG

May 25, 2010
By roxane BRONZE, Saint Cyr / Loire, Other
roxane BRONZE, Saint Cyr / Loire, Other
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I wish I was
A goldfish
With no faith and
With no goal
Turning around
In a bowl


The author's comments:
very simple poem at first look
but tell more than it is writen

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roxane BRONZE said...
on Oct. 18 2011 at 6:05 am
roxane BRONZE, Saint Cyr / Loire, Other
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thank you very much

on Apr. 27 2011 at 1:34 pm
KelseyDay BRONZE, Easley, South Carolina
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I love this poem! It is the cutest poem that I have ever read. I like how it rhymed and it had a very nice flow!


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